It was difficult not to be aware early in life of deficiencies in health provision, unequal availability of health services and to endemic disease, such as cholera, and especially affecting the rural population, in my home country of Rwanda. From an early age, it had been my hope to do something abo…
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MPH Public, Community, and Behavioral Health
MISDI Mgmt of IS and Digital Innovation, Chinese
I am fully aware of the extremely competitive nature of your distinguished MSc Management of Information Systems and Digital Innovation (MISDI) Program at the University of XX (XXU). Nevertheless, I have hope to I believe not to be unfounded, primarily as a result of my academic preparation in the U…
Masters TESOL, Applicant from Pakistan
Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL b…
Chiropractics, Philosopher, Pharmacy Supervisor
Perhaps the fact that I am earning my undergraduate degree in Philosophy yet work for Kaiser Permanente as a Pharmacy Supervisor speaks to a rebellious, subversive, or non-traditional side of my character that is manifest in my distaste for traditional medicine. My choice of Chiropractics as a caree…
MSIS Degree, Chinese Fluent in Russian
Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished MSIS program at XXXX University is the fact that I am a young Chinese woman who is fluent in Russian as well as English. The latter seemed to come more naturally for me because I got off to an earlier start; Russian was more dif…
MPH Epidemiology, Saudi Cardiologist
My central professional dream in life is to become the finest and most distinguished interventional cardiologist—and a tireless advocate for public health advancement--in my city, Jeddah, Saudi Arabia. I want to become recognized as a mover and shaker in medicine who helps to implement changes in ou…
Masters Degree in Finance, Saudi Arabian
A young Saudi Arabian man, still only 25 years old, I was born into a privileged family and this is the primary reason why I serve as a board member of one of the largest real estate companies in Saudi Arabia, because it is our family business. My father wants very much to start a partner financial …
MBA International Business, Finance, Iranian
Originally from Iran, coming to America at 16 and now 29 years old, I feel almost as American as I do Iranian. I hope very much to be accepted to your MBA Program at XXXX University for several reasons. First and foremost, I simply feel strongly that your program is the strongest program in DC (if n…
OT Masters, Aid to Pediatric Physical Therapist
There will be other applicants with higher scores and better grades than mine mostly because I have only been in active recovery for the past year from my own psychological disorder, Bulimia. I humbly ask, however, for you to accept me into your program because I have now completed all of the prereq…
Ph.D. in Linguistics, South Korean Applicant
I was born and raised in South Korea and came to the US in 2010. I am now in my senior year of a bachelor degree program in English Language and Literature. My goal is to join a challenging but supportive program that will enable me to conduct research relating to the effects of culture on language…
PsyD Program, PTSD, California
I am applying to your competitive PsyD Program at the XXXX because I am convinced that my drive and determination will enable me to excel. I have a great passion for research in psychology, particularly in the areas of post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). Now 36, psychology is a career change for …
Fellowship International Relations, Chinese HK
The worth of a subject, among most of the people I know, is measured only in terms of its income-creating potential. My choice of History was met with incredulity, among relatives and friends who could see no way of capitalizing on knowledge of the past. Bright students are expected to study such su…
MA International Affairs, Indonesian Woman
As a child, I loved maps. This interest developed into a curiosity about the differences and similarities in the way people in these different places on the map lived, ate, spoke and earned their livelihoods. This awareness of the world and its variety has increased with time and with the substantia…
Computer Science MS, Networking, Vietnamese
My goal is to become a leading software engineer in the computer networking industry. To attain my goal, I intend to pursue a higher degree in Computer Science with a concentration on networking and hope that this might be in the best program available, which I believe is at XXXX.
My interest in ap…
MSW Degree Online, US Navy
I have now been in the US Navy for the past 12 years and it is my home; and the context in which I hope to continue to make progress professionally as a social worker. It is my intention to excel in your flagship Masters Program in Social Work at UXX based not only on my experience with the military…
Masters PA, Spanish Translator, Sports Medicine
Hilda was an indigent patient who spoke only Spanish and so I was called in to translate. The news was bad and it was my duty to deliver the test results and the prognosis to her. Hilda had an inoperative brain malignancy. If the diagnosis had been made earlier, Hilda would almost certainly have sur…
Masters PA Studies, At-Risk Communities, German
My family has no medical connection that I can trace nor can I claim an early longing to become a PA, nurse or doctor. In fact I was, until fairly recently, happy to be a dedicated and reasonably well rewarded ‘back room girl’ working as a Research Analyst. However, over the years, I have met peop…
MA Ed. Communication Disorders, Bilingual
When teaching pre-school children, I became aware that communication problems in children are much more common than I had suspected that there are insufficient trained people to deal with the situation especially in a bi-cultural setting and that the failure to offer effective and early intervention…
Master of Engineering, Aerospace, Canada, Iraq
My decision to apply to the postgraduate program in the University of XXXX’s Institute for Aerospace Studies is a culmination of my lifelong passion for aeronautics. I first fell in love with aeroplanes when I was five years old. Living in a house that was very close to an airport, I remember standi…
PHD Engineering Education, Mgmt, Vietnam
I was once asked “Who is your engineering hero?” and answered perfectly honestly that it is my father. My father ran an auto repair shed in South Vietnam; he repaired and serviced three wheel taxis and automobiles. People relied on my father to enable them to make a living and feed their children a…