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MS Financial Engineering, Instruments, Chinese

My introduction to Financial Engineering came in my junior year in college.  I was immediately fascinated by the subject and recognized its basic importance in achieving everyone’s financial well-being. I undertook some private research and decided then that this was the specialty that I would like …

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Masters I/O Psychology, Workplace Stress, Chinese

My decision to seek to specialise in I.O. Psychology has been made lightly or quickly. It arises from the fact that a close relative suffers a serious illness that is triggered by work related stress. His situation prompted me to some informal study of the subject and the more I read, the more inter…

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MSW, Social Service Administration

I hope to earn the Master’s Degree in Social Work through The University of XXXX’s School of Social Service Administration (SSA) because I see it as the optimal springboard upon which I might best launch my career dedicated to helping to prevent child abuse and most of all helping children that have…

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MIS Masters Information, Dubai, Indian

A student from India, I hope to be accepted to your competitive Masters Program in MIS at XXXXUniversity on the basis of my creative ideas; and the fact that I am now completing an internship of almost one year in Dubai, UAE. Now acquiring a great deal of cutting-edge knowledge and recent experience…

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MPH Public, Community, and Behavioral Health

It was difficult not to be aware early in life of deficiencies in health provision, unequal availability of health services and to endemic disease, such as cholera, and especially affecting the rural population, in my home country of Rwanda. From an early age, it had been my hope to do something abo…

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Masters Food Science, Chinese

When I was a little girl, my family’s restaurant kitchen was my wonderland. I loved to wander around it to see what was going on. I became increasingly inquisitive about different ingredients at a very young age and choosing between different culinary styles. I grew up in an environment that was hea…

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MISDI Mgmt of IS and Digital Innovation, Chinese

I am fully aware of the extremely competitive nature of your distinguished MSc Management of Information Systems and Digital Innovation (MISDI) Program at the University of XX (XXU). Nevertheless, I have hope to I believe not to be unfounded, primarily as a result of my academic preparation in the U…

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Masters TESOL, Applicant from Pakistan

Now that I am close to finishing up my double major in Business and Accounting, I want very much to pursue a Masters in TESOL. Having learned ESL as a child, I find a great deal of personal satisfaction helping others to reach their fullest potential in English and I have a great passion for TESOL b…

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Chiropractics, Philosopher, Pharmacy Supervisor

Perhaps the fact that I am earning my undergraduate degree in Philosophy yet work for Kaiser Permanente as a Pharmacy Supervisor speaks to a rebellious, subversive, or non-traditional side of my character that is manifest in my distaste for traditional medicine. My choice of Chiropractics as a caree…

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MSIS Degree, Chinese Fluent in Russian

Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished MSIS program at XXXX University is the fact that I am a young Chinese woman who is fluent in Russian as well as English. The latter seemed to come more naturally for me because I got off to an earlier start; Russian was more dif…

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MS Nutritional Science, Singapore

Food is my first love and the more I learn about nutrition, health, and the importance of preventive medicine for public health and well-being, the more I hope to be accepted to your particularly distinguished Master’s Program in Nutritional Science at XXXX University.

Still only 20 years old, I …

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MPA, California State Government

The UXX XXXX School is the only graduate program to which I am applying for three reasons: its location a few blocks from the California State Capital, the policy outreach opportunities that are an integral part of your program, and the fact that the XXXX School is recognized consistently as being n…

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MPH Epidemiology, Saudi Cardiologist

My central professional dream in life is to become the finest and most distinguished interventional cardiologist—and a tireless advocate for public health advancement--in my city, Jeddah, Saudi Arabia. I want to become recognized as a mover and shaker in medicine who helps to implement changes in ou…

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Masters Degree in Finance, Saudi Arabian

A young Saudi Arabian man, still only 25 years old, I was born into a privileged family and this is the primary reason why I serve as a board member of one of the largest real estate companies in Saudi Arabia, because it is our family business. My father wants very much to start a partner financial …

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MBA International Business, Finance, Iranian

Originally from Iran, coming to America at 16 and now 29 years old, I feel almost as American as I do Iranian. I hope very much to be accepted to your MBA Program at XXXX University for several reasons. First and foremost, I simply feel strongly that your program is the strongest program in DC (if n…

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MPA Mexican-American Issues, North Carolina

I am a Mexican-American man, 27, born and raised mostly in California; I am now a permanent resident of North Carolina. I relocated here initially to attend the XXXX School of Law. As a result of a death in the family back home in California, however, I only completed one year of law school, in 2013…

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OT Masters, Aid to Pediatric Physical Therapist

There will be other applicants with higher scores and better grades than mine mostly because I have only been in active recovery for the past year from my own psychological disorder, Bulimia. I humbly ask, however, for you to accept me into your program because I have now completed all of the prereq…

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Ph.D. in Linguistics, South Korean Applicant

I was born and raised in South Korea and came to the US in 2010. I am now in my senior year of a bachelor degree program in English Language and Literature. My goal is to join a challenging but supportive program that will enable me to conduct research relating to  the effects of culture on language…

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PsyD Program, PTSD, California

I am applying to your competitive PsyD Program at the XXXX because I am convinced that my drive and determination will enable me to excel. I have a great passion for research in psychology, particularly in the areas of post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). Now 36, psychology is a career change for …

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Fellowship International Relations, Chinese HK

The worth of a subject, among most of the people I know, is measured only in terms of its income-creating potential. My choice of History was met with incredulity, among relatives and friends who could see no way of capitalizing on knowledge of the past. Bright students are expected to study such su…

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