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PHD Computer Science, Networks, Saudi

“Why do you want to do this?” People have said to me, in the tone one might use to a person threatening to jump from a cliff!  So I very carefully considered my motives before making this application. My reasons are: I love challenges and solving problems; I want to achieve something significant; I …

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MSW Master’s Degree, Caribbean, Hispanic

I am a woman of Hispanic heritage, born in the Dominican Republic and have been resident in the United States since the age of 10. I speak English and Spanish. I hold a BS degree in Industrial Engineering Technology and a BA degree in Modern Languages (Spanish) with a minor in Business Management. I…

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Global Executive MBA, Canada, Pakistan

I am applying to your world-class executive MBA program because I am convinced that the greatest contribution that I might be able to make to society would be to create circumstances where not only I can help the less fortunate but also influence my peers to work towards a better business environmen…

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PHD Degree Program in Economics, China

My language skills—near native in French, advanced intermediate Spanish, and several years of German and Chinese—are only matched by my dedication to the studies of economic development, especially in Latin America and China. I look forward to dedicating my life to the study of sustainable economic …

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Master’s Nurse Anesthesia, ICU, Filipino

As a man, I am proud to be a nurse. And as a Filipino, I am especially pleased to contribute to the beautiful diversity that characterizes the face of health care in America. I have been working as a Registered Nurse now for almost 5 years, ever since I immigrated to America from the Philippines, fo…

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PHD, Doctorate, International Health, Kenya

Clean food, drinking water that is safe, and quality medical facilities are features in Americans lives that many can, and thankfully so, take for granted.  Having been born and raised in Kenya, I saw and experienced firsthand the devastating effects of infectious diseases, multitudes of children or…

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MSN, Masters Nursing, Family Nurse Practitioner

The MSN program at XXU is my sole choice for academic development.  After careful research, discussing FNP programs with my colleagues, and indeed soul searching, I have come to believe that no other program can offer me the same breadth and autonomy of curriculum, nor critical exposure within a pro…

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MA-HRM, Human Resource Management, Africa


The most formative privilege that I have had in life has been working as a volunteer with the American Red Cross as a member of a Disaster Action Team. This has helped me to gain a much better understanding of how organizations work, especially under pressure, and this experience has inspired me t…

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MA, Educational Leadership, Native American


For the past five years, I have dedicated myself to the education of teens as a credentialed and highly involved high school classroom teacher.  This devotion, coupled with my refined approach to work even outside of the classroom has made me a successful teacher.  While I have filled my time with…

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MS Health Informatics, Hispanic Single Mother


For the past twenty-five years, I have maintained a conceptual continuity in my academics and professional career, dedicated to providing quality medical experiences for patients, superior working environments as a medical office manager, interdisciplinary medical-legal office manager, and twelve …

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MA, Masters, Mental Health Counseling, Hispanic


For years, I served clients in a number of senior professional customer service roles, managing and coordinating other customer service personnel.  Bringing this experience to Hispanic Services Counsel (HSC), as a Family Support Coordinator, I had no idea that an untapped part of me would suddenly…

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M.Eng, Masters Petroleum Engineering


Having reached a point in my career where I feel I will quickly exhaust every path of opportunity and challenge at my current scholastic level, I am eager to embark upon the next chapter of my Petroleum Engineering education.  My experiences have convinced me that I am exactly where I need to be i…

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MS, Masters, Computer Science, Japan

From the time I was introduced to the rudiments of Computer Science, I have excelled in the study of algorithms, programming languages and data processing.  Increasing my depth of knowledge in Computer Science through active research and perhaps teaching assistantships and or tutoring, I will become…

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MSNA, Masters Nurse Anesthesiology, Philippines

The seriousness with which I have approached my education and four years of practical clinical experience as an OR and ICU nurse is evidence of my desire to take my nursing career as far as I possibly can.  Excelling in academics, my BS in Nursing was achieved with a near-perfect GPA and represe…

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Merit-Based Scholarship Application in Social Work

The prospect of attending the XXXX School of Social Work is incredibly exciting for me, my family, and the professionals who have given support in all of my educational and volunteer endeavors.  However, the realities of financial ability are all-too-real for my family and me.  Upon being accept…

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MSN, Family Nurse Practitoner, FNP

For fifteen years, I have maintained a commitment to caring for others and the field of Nursing.  As an RN, I have taken care of patients  from the day they are born until the day they die, have supported a family of a young child having their first asthma attack to supporting the family of a lo…

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Ph.D. Doctorate, Marketing, Kuwait

Being born into a family that has always encouraged utilizing to the fullest extent our inherent gifts, I have excelled in every academic venture I have undertaken, maintaining almost a decade of conceptual continuity in both my professional and scholastic endeavors.  I have adopted my parents’ stan…

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MSN/WHCNP-Certified Women’s Health

For over two decades, I have maintained a conceptual continuity in my academics and professional career.  My work has garnered me many proficiencies, and I have been exposed to many differing surgical cases: ENT, GYN, GU, plastics, general, ortho, plastics, eyes, hands, oral, neuron, peripheral vasc…

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PHD Public Administration, Africa, Uganda

I have reached a point in my professional, volunteer and academic career where I realize that  in order to affect the kind of changes that I feel addresses the greatest, most pressing needs in healthcare disparities, particularly with regards to maternal health, I need to enter into an academic rela…

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Executive Master of Leadership, Police Officer

A police officer from Los Angeles, a dedicated public servant, I am as comfortable working in the office as walking the beat. A compassionate and sensitive man, I have always struggled to do what is right, even though police officers sometimes have to directly face supreme difficulties in figuring o…

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