Personal Statement Writing Service, Editing Help for Admission to Graduate School

I am here to help you with your Personal Statement of Purpose for admission to a program of advanced study, fellowship, scholarship, or residency position. My service takes anywhere from a few hours to several days, depending on how quickly you provide me with the information that I need. I am a creative writer for higher, fast and highly specialized (no templates used) and I produce an extremely high quality, model statement on your behalf and then work with you on the revision at no extra charge. Often, to the extent to which I have time, I am able to produce your first paragraph at no charge or obligation. Originally from the US, I have lived all over the world. Since I am now a resident of Bolivia, this enables me to maintain especially reasonable prices for my service.

Sample 1st 2 Paragraphs for the Doctoral Degree in Gerontology, Hispanic

Probably the weakest aspect of my application to your distinguished Doctoral Program in Gerontology at UXX is that many of my competitors will have higher GRE Scores than I do. It is my hope that you will select me nevertheless, however, primarily on the basis of the fact that I am originally from Honduras, bilingual, bicultural, and with a proven track record of concern for the elderly, especially those that are particularly vulnerable, abused, neglected, abandoned. Of course, I have a special interest in the welfare of elderly Latinos and look forward to excelling in this area, especially as a researcher during and after your program.

During my first year of high school, mature for my age and in search of a cause and a calling, my grandmother was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s and I watched her deteriorate quickly in front of my eyes. This gave me my crusade and since that time I have been working in my spare time, for years now, to learn all that I can about dementia. By the time that I graduate from your doctoral program at UXX, I fully intend to be capable of giving anyone who would ask me, for example, an extremely cogent, thoughtful, and multi-faceted answer to the complex question of why Hispanics are approximately 1.5 percent more likely than non-Hispanic whites to suffer from dementia.

For more than 20 years, I have helped hundreds of applicants from all over the world to get accepted into the finest English-speaking universities, graduate programs, fellowships, scholarships, internships, and residency positions. I provide my clients with uniquely creative, state-of-the-art statements of purpose, personal statements, and letters of motivation, intent, interest, goals, objectives and mission. As a courtesty service for those applicants who decide to use my service for their statement, I am happy to edit your resume or CV.

I edit and enhance cover letters and letters of recommendation. In short, I am your one-stop shop for all of your paperwork needs: so you can focus on your march to success with full paperwork support.

Sample 1st Paragraph, International Dentist from India

A dentist from India who is now a Canadian citizen, still only 30 years old, I am a woman who is full of energy and determination to rebuild her career in dentistry here in America, her new permanent home. Not just a home, however, I also think of America as a base for the practice of global dentistry. My heart is in dental missions and I profoundly hope to devote increasing amounts of my time in this area of dentistry, especially over the long term. Since shortly after coming to America 5 years ago, I have been working as a dental hygienist and constantly learning from the dentists in our practice. Dr. XXXX, my primary mentor, constantly encourages me to pursue my goal of becoming a DDS in North America. He is especially supportive of my foremost area of research interest and dedication where I hope to most distinguish myself professionally, in the design and implementation of non-surgical protocols for the systematic evaluation, diagnosis, and treatment of patients. 

All of the Statement samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and all are anonymous.


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