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Statements of Excellence in Business

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I see Global MBAs as the primary economic and development motors of the world, Thus, It is a privilege to help as many people as I can in this area, in addition to applicants to DBA and PHD Programs in Business Administration.

It is always a special honor to draft DBA, PHD, and MBA statements on behalf of clients whose story excites me, applicants who I feel strongly are in a unique position to give something of importance back to the profession of Business Administration. I only do my best, taking the time to reflect on your story as well, usually doing some internet research on your behalf.

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My service is quite different from other statement writing services on the Internet for applicants to graduate school in Business. I am the little guy on the web, not a big business like most of my competitors. You deal directly with me. I answer all of your questions completely free of charge and I am solely responsible for producing a statement that you are very pleased with.

If you are in a hurry for your statement and you want me to give you prompt attention and priority service, please make your payment as soon as possible. Often, I am able to finish your statement within 24 hours, no more than 48, after I have the information that I need to work with.

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For more than 20 years, I have helped hundreds of applicants from all over the world to get accepted into the finest English-speaking universities, graduate programs, fellowships, scholarships, internships, and residency positions. I provide my clients with uniquely creative, state-of-the-art statements of purpose, personal statements, and letters of motivation, intent, interest, goals, objectives and mission. As a courtesty service for those applicants who decide to use my service for their statement, I am happy to edit your resume or CV.

I edit and enhance cover letters and letters of recommendation. In short, I am your one-stop shop for all of your paperwork needs: so you can focus on your march to success with full paperwork support.

The single biggest reason why startups succeed. Bill Gross has founded a lot of startups, and incubated many others — and he got curious about why some succeeded and others failed.


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 If you want your Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement to be successful, you have to write it in such a way as to make those in charge of the selection process curious about you and to look forward to meeting you. You need to portray yourself in your statement as the kind of person that they want to have in their program. I am a practiced master at drafting your story in the best, most eloquent fashion possible, in the way that is most appealing to those who make the selection. I am so certain of my ability that I draft the first paragraph of your statement free of charge and at no further obligation.  If you really like the first paragraph that I produce, then I would then be honored to finish the statement on your behalf. 

3 lessons on success from an Arab businesswoman Leila Hoteit. Professional Arab women juggle more responsibilities than their male counterparts, and they face more cultural rigidity than Western women.

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Great Accomplishments in Business

We believe that the greatest accomplishments in business have come about through innovation. So here are some of the most innovative companies (in our book) that have been making waves in the last couple of years.

Warby Parker

Warby Parker is an American e-retailer of sunglasses and prescription eyeglasses that also has twenty physical retail locations.

Launched in 2010, the company opened its first standalone store in 2013, and while Warby may be known for its try-at-home packs of inexpensive hipster-approved frames, it was founded to "build a business that could solve problems instead of creating them." –to that end, the company partners with nonprofits to train people to provide eye exams and sell glasses in their own communities.

At home, the NYC-based brand has pledged to donate approximately 20,000 pairs of glasses to local students in need over the next four years. The company hopes to roll out similar programs country wide in the near future.


Apple Inc. is an American technology company that almost everyone knows. It’s recognized for its pivotal developments in hardware, software, and online services.

Cofounded in 1976 by the revered tech entrepreneur and inventor Steve Jobs and engineer Steve Wozniack, Apple has continually revolutionized the consumer electronics industry.

This company helped usher in the age of the personal computer in the 1980s with the sleek, affordable Macintosh; it bolstered the age of digital-music listening with the iPod in 2001 (and later iTunes), and laid the groundwork for the current smartphone landscape with 2007's iPhone and iOS operating system.

Apple is now a multinational corporation, influencing consumer technology on a global level, growing an entertainment business with Apple Music and Apple TV—even breaking into the auto and health care industries.

Apple is the dominant high-end phone maker in China—its second-most important market after the United States, where its mobile operating system already enjoys a 44% market share after Android's 51%, despite the price differentiation. Globally, the iPhone has the second-highest smartphone market share, second to Samsung. 

Apple's design-first approach has become enmeshed in the fabric of everything the company touches, from its fast-growing retail concept, the Apple Store, to the interfaces of 2010's iPad and 2015's Apple Watch.

The company has been expanding beyond its traditional consumer electronics roots. In 2014, Apple purchased headphones and music streaming company Beats for nearly $3 billion, laying the groundwork for its own streaming service Apple Music, for launch in 2015. It’s also growing its entertainment footprint.

In its fiscal 2015 fourth quarter, Apple posted quarterly revenue of $51.5 billion: its most successful year ever.

Up next on the horizon for the company will be a push to expand its global reach. Apple has been doubling App Store sales in China every year since 2013. It is in the process of growing its fleet of physical Apple Stores in China from just six stores in 2013 to forty in the next year.


The West has a simple narrative about Alibaba: it’s a Chinese e-commerce giant that raised $25 billion in an IPO in New York last fall, and is a sort of eBay-Amazon-Paypal hydra.

However, in China, the company—run by CEO Jack Ma—is far more ambitious. Last year, it began targeting some of the country’s most moneyed industries, from banking to entertainment.

Its Internet finance arm, Yu’e Bao, looks to have the earliest impact: it offers Alipay customers higher returns than state-run banks that pay paltry interest rates. Starved for investment options, the masses responded in droves by putting in $82 billion in the first year. Blue ocean success in motion!


Google has been improving its machine learning technology for years. The company announced in mid-2015 that Google Photos was now searchable—type in "cat" and pictures of your pet will pop up.

Another development was unveiled in 2015: Smart Reply, a plug-in for Inbox that reads emails and suggests short responses.

None of its new developments are quite perfect yet, but all of them were the result of Google's artificial intelligence engine, TensorFlow, often considered one of the world's most advanced AI systems.

TensorFlow processes complicated data through a neural network faster than any of Google's previous AI engines. It can be run on thousands of computers, meaning it's scalable.

Perhaps the most significant--and surprising--announcement regarding TensorFlow came when Google decided to open-source part of it—letting anyone try out its algorithms and, it hopes, improve them.

The goal, according to the tech company, is to "accelerate research on machine learning"—which could certainly benefit both Google and the data community as a whole.


Design porn is fun until you try redesigning your own home, and realize you have no idea whether you can afford that granite countertop and if you can find a contractor to do the job well and within budget.

That’s the fragmented, time-sucking conundrum that Adi Tatarko and her husband faced in 2009, as they renovated their home.

And that’s why they started Houzz: a visually-driven platform where consumers can find trusted home renovators, professional designers, and even shop by photos of their dream bathrooms or kitchens.

In six years, it has an audience of 25 million active monthly users and seemingly endless opportunities to shape the $300 billion global design and decor market to its taste.

Business is a space there creativity is at its most profitable. You can also tailor it to your values and tastes. How will you do that? And can be assist you with a great personal statement to get you onto the best program possible?